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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves -say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her -explain how to apply for the job

#friend #job #country #company #-tell #sort #work #-say #-explain
Dear Sarah, How are you doing? I’m writing to spread the news about a job opportunity that seems to be perfect for you! It is the
position
 of an accounting manager in an extremely famous insurance company called Willis Towers Watson Brazil.
This
 post offers a chance not only to manage a team
,
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 but
also
 to deal with all the accounting and finance routines
such
 as calculating payroll taxes, preparing cash flow, analyzing the bank accounts and so on. The schedule is working from Monday to Friday and the initial salary is around R$ 75.000 per year. The company
also
 offers some extra benefits
such
 as medical insurance, paid vacation and bonuses. I believe that
this
position
 is so suitable for you not only because of the accounting course we took
last
 year in Montreal but
also
 because you already have experience in an insurance company.When I saw
this
position
 on LinkedIn, I remembered that you were seeking for manager
position
 in the finance area. For applying to
this
 opportunity, you’ll need to search on LinkedIn: Willis Towers Watson Brazil, so that you can check the details requirement including documents, which are necessary for
this
 post. Good luck! Best wishes, Raquel.
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