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Only rich people should donate to charity. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #charity
A number of
people
 argue that donations to charity should be made solely by affluent individuals. From my perspective, I hold the opinion that not only should
people
 who are financially stable but
also
 who come from all social brackets including the poor ones make some contributions to society. On the one hand, it is undeniable that the rich could donate millions of dollars or even more to charity organizations.
This
 is due to the fact that these
people
 possess a relatively abundant living
condition
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 that they can spare some of their income for donations with the thought that their
money
 is well-spent. In fact, it is a common belief in many countries that rich
people
 should take part in some voluntary projects and charity programs for the poor to gain credibility and reliability.
On the other hand
, with the advent of technology, almost anyone can willingly donate to charities. There are numerous reliable online fundraising websites for
people
 of all
status
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 give their
money
 to suffering
people
 without having to donate directly to the organization, not to mention that the
money
 donated can be at all ranges.
For example
, during the recent Covid-19 pandemic, hardly can
people
 who were having hard times survive if
people
 from all over Vietnam sent them some
money
 to buy aid, food and even build shelters. In brief,
although
 the well-off ones should shoulder the burden of donations, I opine that only joint efforts from various parties in the community can make our society better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • philanthropy
  • broader spectrum
  • mutual aid
  • affluent
  • foundations
  • oversimplifies
  • multifaceted
  • socioeconomic
  • inclusive
  • democratizing donations
  • online fundraising platforms
  • social media campaigns
  • micro-donations
  • driving social change
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