Some people believe that technology has made the lives of workers easier whilst other people disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree
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Nowadays
technology
is developing from
day by day which is very helpful for all Change preposition
apply
people
who are a
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apply
workers
. It plays an
significant role to assist Change the article
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people
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a variety
technology
can made
the lives of Change the verb form
make
be made
worker
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enhance
people
lifestyle.
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pandemic
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worker
around the world are difficult to go to Change to a plural noun
workers
work
. Some companies
are bankrupt due to the lack of technology
. For instance
, many
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in many
companies
and factory
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factories
techonlogy
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technology
workers
no need to spend much time to go
to Change the verb form
going
work
. Workers
only need their computer and internet connection to continue their work
from home. Therefore
it makes clear that technology
still support workers
even in difficult
situation.
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a difficult
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, Technology
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improves
workers
connectivity with other Change to a genitive case
worker's
workers'
people
all over the world. Some companies
are not
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are not working
work
with each other inside their Correct your spelling
workplace
work place
, they need to connect and build more communication with Correct your spelling
workplace
people
from outside of their country. For example
, some companies
which are having the big company from oversea, so they need start using the different kinds of trustfull
app or website Correct your spelling
trustful
such
as Zoom, Google Meet, and so no. These app
help Fix the agreement mistake
apps
workers
to meet and discuss their working process without
face to face with each other. Change preposition
apply
Workers
no need to waste too much time and save their money for travel. Thus
it is proved that technology
support
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supports
workers
without any doutful
.
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techonology
is an important one for Correct your spelling
technology
improve
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improving
people
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people's
work life
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work-life
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even though
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out of difficulty. More Correct your spelling
speed
techonology
create more Correct your spelling
technology
people
lifestyle. Change noun form
people's
Therefore
we can say that people
really need techology
as a part of their workplace or homeplace to expand their working efficiently. After Correct your spelling
technology
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through
throught
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a throught
analyze
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analysis
on
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of
this
topic, I can predict that the technology
demand will be rise
up in the future to support Change the verb form
rise
workers
due to the more developing
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development
creating
of the factories, private and public Replace the word
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