In many countries fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.
Fast
food
is increase
rapidly in all countries, due to Change the verb form
is increasing
plethora
of choices and reasonable Correct article usage
the plethora
prize
. Correct your spelling
price
People
find it desirable and convenient to eat this
Change the determiner
this food item
these food items
food
items, they please their teste
more than regular Correct your spelling
taste
food
. This
essay will discuss both sides, and my opinion also
be
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is
Add an article
a highlight
the highlight
highlight
.
To commence with, there are Wrong verb form
highlighted
few
advantages of consuming Correct article usage
a few
the
junk Correct article usage
apply
food
. The foremost one that is
, 95 % of people
consider street food
as a one time meal,
because it is low prize Remove the comma
apply
food
also
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
prepared
quickly. So, Add a missing verb
is prepared
it's
Unnecessary verb
it
save
time. Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
Add an article
A person
The person
Person
from hectic Fix the agreement mistake
People
lifestyle
mostly Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
prefer
Change the verb form
prefers
these
Change the determiner
this precooked food
precooked
Correct your spelling
pre-cooked
food
. In addition
, there are umpteen choices in each food
, so,individual
can choose Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
food
as per their mood or what they want. For example
,nowadays,due to the advancement of technology,people
are able to order food
via mobile phones , such
as ,
Zomato, Swiggy, Domino's pizza,Uber eats and many more, Remove the comma
apply
this
app can delivered
any Change the verb form
deliver
be delivered
food
at
24x7.Change preposition
apply
Thus
, it is easy for people
to eat anything in
anytime.
On the flip side, in spite of Change preposition
at in
Correct article usage
the positive
positive
connected with fast Fix the agreement mistake
positives
food
,it
negatives should not be Change the pronoun
its
the
neglected . The Correct article usage
apply
first
drawback is that ,
Remove the comma
apply
majority
of snacks are unhealthy and lower quality Correct article usage
the majority
food
, which effects
Correct your spelling
affects
on
Change preposition
apply
peoples
health. Change noun form
people's
Such
as , the
sugary snacks cause Correct article usage
apply
the
diabetes,high cholesterol,heart dieses and many others. Change the article
apply
Furthermore
, the more consumption of junk food
leads Change preposition
to the
the
Correct article usage
an
increasing
Replace the word
increase
of
obesity and Change preposition
in
risk
of other problems. Correct article usage
the risk
For example
, In current
era, when both Add an article
the current
parent
Change to a plural noun
parents
going
Wrong verb form
go
for
Change preposition
to
works
, they give some extra money to their child to eat Fix the agreement mistake
work
somthing
from Correct your spelling
something
market
, and kids attract the advertisement of Add an article
the market
food
which is unhealthy. The main reason behind the trend that why children eat outside because less cooking healthy meals at home. Likwise
, Correct your spelling
Likewise
food
from outside is tested delicious but it is not nutrients and hygienic, it also
not
give the necessary vitamins and calcium. Eat fast Add a missing verb
does not
food
on daily basis people
are habit from prosessed
Correct your spelling
processed
food
.
In conclusion , people
's health is most important than anything else, they should try to reduce the overuse of street food
, which great
effects Add a missing verb
has great
in
Change preposition
on
peoples
Change noun form
people's
body
.After Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
Scrutinized
the Wrong verb form
scrutinising
further
paragraphs I think disadvantages
of fast Correct article usage
the disadvantages
food
are
outweigh Unnecessary verb
apply
it's
advantages because nothing is more important than healthy living .Correct your spelling
its
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