Many governments think that economic grow is their most important goal. Some people, however, thinks that other type of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Number
of higher authorities think that economic Change the article
A number
The number
growth
is the most crucial goal for the betterment of the country
. Whereas, on other hand, some individuals insist that not only economic growth
but there are also
some other types of progress which are equally essential for the development
of the country
.
To begin
with, governments think that economic growth
is very important in developing countries as well as in developed countries because it helps the citizens of the nation to become better in their
every Correct pronoun usage
apply
aspects
of life. Prioritizing Change to a singular noun
aspect
economy
, helps the nation to achieve Correct article usage
the economy
primary
needs of the people Correct article usage
the primary
such
as food, shelter, security, and accommodation. Moreover
, a powerful economic country
help
the government to make more money and Change the verb form
helps
then
utilise that money on developing facilities which lead
to Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
enhance
the quality of one's life and Wrong verb form
enhancing
bring
prosperity to their region. Take China as an example, China's people have Wrong verb form
bringing
far
better lifestyle as they are government invested more in the Add an article
a far
development
of economy
rather than investing in other sections.
Correct article usage
the economy
On the other hand
, there are also
some other types of progress such
as education facilities as well as tourism development
. To illustrate this
, as
we know that if the literacy level in a particular state is higher so, it Correct word choice
apply
become
easy for a Change the verb form
becomes
country
to achieve their goals more efficiently. Furthermore
tourism Add a comma
,Furthermore
development
also
play
a vital role to generate income for the nation so, Change the verb form
plays
therefore
government
should take necessary steps Add an article
the government
such
as advertising beautiful monuments , parks , eco-friendly
areas. Correct word choice
and eco-friendly
This
measures will directly attract tourists to visit their Correct determiner usage
These
country
. For, example there are many European countries who
generate income from tourist attractions.
To conclude Correct pronoun usage
that
this
topic, I personally believe that underdeveloped regions should prefer on
economic Change preposition
apply
growth
in order to acquire primary
needs Correct article usage
the primary
for
the citizens. Change preposition
of
Nonetheless
education and tourism innovations should Add a comma
,Nonetheless
be adopt
by developing and developed lands.Change the verb form
be adopted
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