The excess use of gadgets effect the child's development and body growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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uses

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of gadgets in

children

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are in

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highly

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arguing

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point in

todays

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world

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some people find it helpful to use

device

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devices

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to build up their skills. In

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essay,

i

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will provide sufficient information about the bad impact on their health.

Children

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are known as fast learners and gadget has been a common accessory in their daily life.

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example

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if we see our daily routine, gadgets are often provided by parents when they fail to feed

the

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children

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has become

very

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common issue in our society which is often

adviced

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advised

by the physicians not to do so. As these

increases

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their motivation to use the device at the same time it becomes

endangerous

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dangerous

to their health issue

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decreasing their

eysight

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eyesight

.

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, watching television for longer than one hour can cause severe health

issue

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such

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as

headache

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, pain in eyesight and much more.

Children

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should be given specific time

limit

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limits

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for the

uses

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use

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of these products.

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Instead

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they can be motivated to play outdoor games or other activities. Today we see more and more

children

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at very early ages suffer

with

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eye problems

such

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as

mayopia

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myopia

,

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and hyperglucomia

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hyperglucomia

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hyperglycemia

. If we take

necessary

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the necessary

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steps, these problems could be solved easily.

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,

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the limitation

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limitation

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limitations

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of gadget

uses

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use

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should be maintained and properly checked by parents.