You recently received a letter from your bank that should have contained a new credit card. Unfortunately, the card was not in the letter.

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Olivia, I am a customer of the bank where you work. I am contacting you because I have a problem with my new credit
card
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. I initiated the process to have the new one
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week and today I received a letter from you where the
card
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must be inside. But it is not there. The letter has some damages and a corner broken. I am not sure about what happened but I think that we have to decide to cancel it because I do not know if
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card
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was stolen or forgotten. I will be quieter with my account and my money if we would do it.
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, I would like to know what it is in the
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step. I need my new credit
card
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as soon as possible so when can I have it? I am looking forward to knowing from you. Thank you for your attention.
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