You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: - explain why you were at the restaurant - describe the problems - write about the action you want the manager to take

preplan: name date and event, dish names and problems

chicken

and not cooked properly and fresh. actions: find out the person behind

this

negligence and take action against him Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to show my disappointment with the services of your renowned restaurant Sera Classic at William Street Road where I had visited with my family on

last

Sunday. At the onset, I was there with my family and some of my close relatives because it was my birthday so my family planned for dine out.

However

, we all faced a lot of problems with the meal. Primarily, two dishes,

Chicken

Curry and

Chicken

with Gravy, were having a bad smell probably because the meat was not fresh.

Moreover

, the

chicken

pieces were not soft enough to eat and ultimately we all were totally annoyed with the meal as these two were the main dishes of our meal.

Lastly

, I want you to look at the seriousness of

this

issue personally lest it should harm the goodwill of your restaurant among customers. If you find out the person behind

this

negligence and terminate his services immediately, it will be a good solution for

this

issue.

In addition

, kindly supervise the supply of fresh meat at your restaurant so that customers can get fresh meat in their dishes which will be really admirable. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

237 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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