Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Ohters believe that they sould only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Disucss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been a controversial topic about how university
students
should have a chance to choose the
subjects
that they only want to learn while others believe that
subjects
such
as technology and science are the best and useful in the future and that's why they only need to study those
subjects
. From my
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, I totally agree with the
first
one and describe the opinions of both sides.
Firstly
, advocates of the former
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highlight that everybody is the same and everyone has their distinctive talents and unique abilities on their own. So,
that is
not really healthy for
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if they are forced to study things they don't like.
Also
, everybody is not keen to become scientists and engineers, some maybe want to become artists and others
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be athletes.
For example
, people who are interested in art will only want to learn artistic
subjects
and
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who are intrigued
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sports might be
more happy
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to learn about how to improve in physical aspects.
Moreover
, it will be really boring and
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abilities of
students
are likely to fall and
as a result
, they
will not get nothing
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from learning if they are only allowed to study
subjects
they don't have
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interest in. Turning to the proponents of the latter one,
they
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believe that if
students
want to learn about the
subjects
they want, they should be doing them in their free time since
subjects
like art and physical activities are already learned in high schools.
In addition
,
subjects
such
as science and technology are very important and have real
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in real life.
Therefore
, they should be taught only those
subjects
in universities and by virtue of that, it is likely to have a greater chance to solve any problems at work if they become adults as almost every
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in the world
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based on
the
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science and technology.
Furthermore
, if
students
were allowed to learn whatever they want, it would deter the curriculum of universities. To conclude, I am of the option of learning
subjects
which the
students
only prefer
although
both sides have their own pros and cons. It will not
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like education if
students
are forced to learn the things that they don't want and every subject is as important as others.
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