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Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligent than human beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Today, our life is full of something new. The cool
things
 are invented by smart people every day.
Furthermore
, rapid
technologies
 change our
standarts
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standards
 and
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lives
lifes
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.
However
, we need to take a view of
this
 point from
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all possible sides.
Firstly
,
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 discuss the advantages of the new
technologies
. In my opinion, modern computers can improve our life. We don`t need to cover the
stressfull
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stressful
, sophisticated and harmful job. We can ask robots and computers to cover all these
things
 by themselves. People shouldn`t take
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of
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lives
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 anymore.
Moreover
, our time is the most important value today. Modern
computes
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 and new
technologies
 can help us to save
our
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time. It is so
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because
 we can do our work more quickly by using them.
Secondly
, we should
also
to
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note the disadvantages of the new
technologies
. The
first
 disadvantage is low
phisical
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physical
 activity.
For example
, a few years ago we needed to go to the supermarkets to buy some food, but now we can use the modern apps to buy something online. I don`t need to go to the office to do my work, because I can
also
 do it online. All these
things
 provoke low
phisical
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physical
 activity. As the result, it can have
the
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 bad impact on our health. The
next
 disadvantage is about
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uncontrolled
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 development of the new technology. We can`t be sure that all these modern
things
 will
be
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aim to help and
to
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protect people in the future. So, our scientists need to check all the risks. Well, the positive development of
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rapid technology can improve our
life
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, but
in
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 the same
moment
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 it can have
the
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 bad impact
for
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 us. We need to check all possible advantages and disadvantages to be ready for everything.
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