You are working for an international company and you would like to request time off for a family event. Write a letter to your boss Explaining what the celebration is Asking for the time off Explaining how you can get work done when you take time off

Dear Mr. Adam, My name is Mikhael

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I am writing

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letter to request permission for my break

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, because next week I have a family gathering in Bali.

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with, next week my big family

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a plan to have a gathering, because we have not gathered for the past 10 years. At the event, we will enjoy our

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eating some good food, exploring the city and having fun.

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event is supposed to cheer our grandparents because we never know when the

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will come.

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, I would like to get your permission to come to the family gathering. Because

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I did not have much

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for my family.

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, I will keep my performance for the company. If there is work to get done, I will finish all of the work before my break

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. I am waiting for your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Mikhael

Sep 2, 2025

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task response

Say the goal in one line at the top of the letter.

coherence

Put one idea in each paragraph.

vocabulary

Use clear and short words.

tone

The tone is polite.

purpose

You show your wish with care.

planning

You say you will finish work before you leave.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

151 words

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