Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is being argued that increasing the
price
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of
petrol
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is the way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
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, I totally stand against
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idea because of uncontrollable inflation and urban chaos. The main reason for my
disgareement
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disagreement
with
this
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idea is a sudden rise in prices. since in some countries with an oil-based economy
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as my country, Iran,
petrol
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is considered a basic commodity , any
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fraction
fluctuation
fractionation
in its
price
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could affect the prices of all other items.
for example
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, two years ago the
price
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of gas was tripled which lead to an increase in
cost
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the cost
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of other products from
grossery
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grocery
to
electronic
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to public
transportation
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.
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This put people
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under severe economic pressure.
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, traffic and pollution may reduce to some extent. yet it is not worth to economic
harms
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it
cuses
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causes
. Another reason for my disagreement
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proposition is the city life issues. In most cities of the
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public
transportation
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is not improved. There are not enough bus lanes and metro lines. The intervals between buses are too long. Public
transportation
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is crowded and uncomfortable. As a
resultof
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result of
simple rain
snowfall
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and snowfall
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people are not able to commute to and from work. If
petrol
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price
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were increased, the majority of society would not be able to afford it and tend to the public
transportation
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which is not improved.
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, city life could be disrupted, because there is not enough public
transportation
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is
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comparison
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the number of individuals. In conclusion, to reiterate, I disagree with making
petrol
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more expensive to control traffic and pollution because of unmanageable
price
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escalation and municipal anarchy. If
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solutionis
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solution is
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put into practice, it could have detrimental impacts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discourage
  • incentivize
  • environmentally friendly
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • pollutants
  • alternative energy sources
  • sustainable economy
  • disproportionately affect
  • daily commuting
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • comprehensive solutions
  • public transportation systems
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