In the past, most. People lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in a large city where they only know a few people in their area. what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Settlements are essential in human existence since they provide shelter and a sense of belonging to the
community
members. But, in historic times, individuals used to settle in a small habitat where they knew each other well, compared to recent days where individuals live together in urban areas and they hardly know their neighbours.
Nevertheless
, there were benefits of living together like
this
such
as
community
support
, and socialization, as well as drawbacks like poor development and disputes. One of the major reasons why people used to live together in a small habitat is that they could offer psychological, emotional, and physical
support
to members of the
community
.
This
is simply because, through day-to-day interaction and proximity of their houses, they are aware of activities and events happening among all members of the settlement.
For example
, if a family member is sick, residents can easily spread the message and help in nursing and encouraging their neighbours in times of hardships.
Thus
,
this
can easily happen in a small
community
than in a large city.
However
, they are downsides associated with living in a small area.
On the other hand
, staying in a small area where one is well known is sometimes challenging when disputes arise. Sometimes there can be misunderstandings when people in an area argue over a certain issue and the matter may escalate resulting in poor relationships between them.
For instance
,children can accidentally break a
neighbours
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windows leading to tension between them.
Also
, they are few opportunities for development in a small
community
since people know one another well, and it is more difficult to be recognised and appreciated than in a large city where they
is
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competition and
support
. To conclude, despite demerits quarrels and poor advancement, living in a small city is more beneficial for the reasons of
support
and socialisation. ultimately,
this
way of living is now less common. 294 words.
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