You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: - explain why you were at the restaurant - describe the problems - write about the action you want the manager to take

Dear sir/madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you regarding a
restaurant
meals problem. I
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restaurant
last
night with my family members. Because my
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birthday in
this
day and holl my family celebrated
this
special occasion. I was very excited to
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restaurant
because
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was hearing you
restaurant
good
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meal
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.
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,
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last
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night
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pm in
you
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restaurant
. I order for
special
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meal
you
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restaurant
. But
i
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was
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rated
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the food my mother saw the rice inside the stone my mother
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for
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this
thing . I tell about you employees and they feel sorry because
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not present the main supervisor. My all family members
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to
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the
restaurant
and the party had does not well.
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am suggesting you the supervisor will be present all time to look
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employees how can work inside the kitchen
otherwise
the
restaurant
will
be fail
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earlier in the future don't one come here. You take action urgently. I am looking forward to hearing from action in our staff members.
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sincerely Dharma
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