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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job og shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

#people #situation #job #og #shortage #money #situations
It is
common
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 belief that some
people
 believe that it is best to accept a bad
situation
such
 as having
a
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 unsatisfactory
job
 or lack of money.
However
, I firmly believe that it is better to make an effort to improve
such
 circumstances because if
people
 don`t
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 anything. In
this
 essay, the views and reasons will be exerted before a conclusion is reached with my opinion. On the one hand,
people
 think that the best way of dealing with difficult circumstances is just accepting
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 because trying
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something
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 new to improve
such
 situations is likely to
more
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worse
it
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them
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.
For instance
, many
people
 quit their
job
 because of unsatisfying,
after
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 that they open their own shop, but they
tend
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 give up it soon because the
job
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also
 unsatisfied for some reasons
such
 as customers` bad manners and low margins.
Nevertheless
, I support the idea that
people
 should
to
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try to
improving
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 bad
situation
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situations
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 because it leads to a better
circumstance
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circumstances
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 after all
although
 it has some problems while processing.
This
is illustrate
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 by one study carried out on
people
 who quit their
job
 because of unsatisfying. what they
was
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 found that
majority
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the majority
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 of them choose to try
to
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apply
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anything to improve
such
situation
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a situation
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were
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and were
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 satisfied
their
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 selection. In conclusion, accepting a bad
situation
 is good
to
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people
 is a 다contentious topic because there are opinions that support and oppose
this
 basic idea.
However
, after considering
this
 matter in a careful manner, I personally that the advantages of trying to solve
such
 bad situations far outweigh the drawbacks.
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