Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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spends a large part of its

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not only on public

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arts.

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, it seems debatable which one is supposed to be elevated to

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priority. From my

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I agree that it is important to spend money on public

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. There are several reasons for spending a significant amount of the

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budget

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on public

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and foremost, public

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are the things

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as hospitals, roads and schools, and these things determine the quality of life that most of us will have.

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, if the

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does not spend enough money on hospitals, the health of our society may decline.

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, if not enough money is spent on schools, our children may not be properly educated.

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, it will be the poor in our society that will be affected more if we do not spend enough on these things because they are the ones more dependent on

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, public

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the development of various kinds of industries and trades.

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, if the

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utilizes an adequate amount of

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refining the public transportation, it will improve the mobility of products and

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companies are trading in. In time, the entire economy of the nation will be boomed noticeably. To sum up, there are clear benefits of ensuring a large amount of investment goes into public

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as

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influences the quality of life for nearly all of us.

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, the national economy will take off as well since the

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is used

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the public service will create a beneficial environment

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all the firms or corporations.