You want to appear for an interview to an another city by train. The train departed late form the station and you could not reach in time. Write a letter to the railway officer of your city. In your letter : * When you travelled and why the train departed late * What happened as a result * How you feel about the problem

Dear Sir , I am writing
this
epistle to seek your kind attention towards an incident that I happened
last
week. I am a resident of Jalandhar and travel through the main railway
station
regularly.
Last
Monday I was having an interview scheduled in Ludhiana at 9 a.m and in line with it I booked a ticket for 7 a.m Intercity-Express but to my utter shock , the
train
did not arrive at the platform on
time
.
Consequently
, when I enquired for the same from the
station
master , he told me that the
train
was rescheduled due to some problems on the track which is under maintenance and would depart with a delay of 30 minutes.
As a result
, the
train
reached my destination post the scheduled
time
and I was not able to reach my interview on
time
much-awaited awaited job position was given to someone else.
This
led to a big blow to my carrier and life goals. Though I am a very old traveller through
this
station
this
time
I do have to express my dissatisfaction with the
station
staff because of
such
a careless attitude towards the repair activities which should have been done before
time
. I shall be highly obliged if you could look into the matter and try to make sure that that
this
kind of circumstances will not occur in future as
this
is the most important and essential means of transport for all of us and every person book his /her calendar matching the
train
timings. In the
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end I would like to thank you for your
time
. Yours faithfully Tarun
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • departure
  • delay
  • train schedule
  • technical issues
  • logistical problems
  • missed appointment
  • financial losses
  • career opportunities
  • frustration
  • disappointment
  • service improvement
  • future occurrences
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