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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Other say that is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuses both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe
that is
 better, for families to encourage their
children
 to spend their
leisure
time
 with
friends
 and classmates because they could learn to
work
 well in a
team
, communication skills and improve their self-confidence. In fact, I believe
this
instead
 of learning by myself. The main reason, for learning and spending
time
 with
friends
 is, that they are influenced by each other, so learning how to connect with others very fast.
Also
, they have to share toys and think about solutions for their problems, and as a result, they learning
work
 well in a
team
. Another reason is, that spending
time
 with
friends
 and classmates could be improving their self-confidence. If some of them do not have any experience with some problems, others can help them without any punishment. Many
children
 learn new things when they are playing with their
friends
.
However
, some people claim that
children
 have to learn how to spend
leisure
time
 by themselves, it is useful for some reason which they could be solving problems by themselves and using their toys alone.
Also
, some
children
 are introverted and they prefer to stay home and spend
time
 by themselves. But with their ,
friends
 they could be learning communication skills, and
work
 well in a
team
. In conclusion, many families believe
that is
 better for
children
 to spend
leisure
time
 with their
friends
 and classmates because they could be learning
work
 well in a
team
, and improving self-confidence and communication skills. But some parents prefer their
children
 spend their
leisure
time
 by themselves.
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