One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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essay’s topic will be about the pros and the cons of medical improvement and

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on people’s life length. The benefits

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medical care are countless.

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of all,

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way there is a big chance of health improvement.

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of all, people with cancer, diabetes,

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and etc. can get their normal

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and routines back.

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a male, sick

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cancer can continue providing for his family

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if the mother is not currently working

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A patient with

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can stay

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to him will be lower.

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the positive aspects is that older people with Diabetes can prolong their living time and that way they can look after their grandchildren, while their parents are away at work. The negative side of

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treatment may be too expensive for families with lower financials.

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they can be limited to pension funds

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because it is not covered by their insurance.

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whole problem can lead to

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it can be for nothing if the results are not positive. Another drawback is the side effects.

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, treating cancer

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chemo-therapy can lead to hair loss, throwing up and energy loss. My own opinion is that it can never be a minus to have some options. There could be hundreds of ways to make it work. For me the chance of living is enough, considering the cons. To conclude, we started

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benefits and some drawbacks

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I included my point of view, which is that improved medical care is always a positive even with the consequences of it. People should always try and never lose hope, even if it looks impossible.