Nowadays, people in most countries decide to have children in life. Why do they do so? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, it seems that young
couple
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much
prefer
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to start a family later.
Although
such
a big decision has some proses, others have a
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opinion with
this
decision. In
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about
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positives
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and negative effects
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attitude. Today,
selection
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criteria for having
children
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changed
between
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young couples. Some people would much prefer to start
family
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in later life.
This
attitude has some advantages. They can experience
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finish together before having a child. They can travel easily without worrying about
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of semester exams for their
children
,
for instance
. Another key feature is that they can be got familiar with each other
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any
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,
such
as economic situation. It means that
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they can be prepared for
future
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life if they want to start a child. Not only does
this
phenomenon have some advantages, but
also
might
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young couples to prepare for
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the role
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of
parents
in
future
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of life. On the other end of the scale, some people are poles apart in attitude. They believe that
this
pattern has adverse effects on families.
First
and foremost, the development of emotional bonds between the young generation and old
parents
is hard to be shaped. It means that
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they cannot keep in touch
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other due to too much age difference. It can make
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of
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emotional stability. Examples to illustrate
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point are stress and anxiety in
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family
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families
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.
Also
, these
parents
are quite old and they are out of touch with the modern world,
such
as using artificial intelligence in teaching and modes of communication. Another key feature is that they are conflicting demands between old
parents
, who decide to start
family
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in later, with their
children
. While
parents
prefer to
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their
children
to
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University, their
children
want to experience financial independence rather than take a degree from college,
for instance
.
Finally
, young couples took
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decide
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to start
family
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in
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for
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long
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time, they would face a challenge for
stable
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upbringing of their
children
. By way of conclusion,
although
some people prefer to start a family in
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time, the disadvantages of having a child
in
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later
is
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hard to be ignored. In my point of view, we need more studies for
better
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understanding
both
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aspects of the issue.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

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  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
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