Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is commonly argued that diligent and consistent
work
seems to be important for accomplishing goals in their Use synonyms
life
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On the contrary
,a few people assume that owning valuable things and an excellent outlook are prime factors for leading a successful Linking Words
life
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This
essay describes both the conflicting views along with suitable illustrations.
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Firstly
, we have come across the common saying that hard Linking Words
work
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implement
will definitely give positive results. Wrong verb form
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For instance
, Elon Musk, The number one billionaire today had Linking Words
initially
undergone multifarious circumstances in Linking Words
life
before accomplishing his current position. He had consistently worked for the betterment of his lifestyle.
In contradiction to the above-mentioned quote, another group of people assume that wealth and a sophisticated lifestyle are pretty mandatory for reaching a milestone in their Use synonyms
life
. As far as I am concerned, I deny Use synonyms
this
fact because money can neither buy values nor experience to become an expert in any field. Linking Words
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also
be illustrated with the same example where Elon musk did not achieve his goals with his appearance alone.
In a nutshell, According to me, for one's Linking Words
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life
hard Add a comma
,life
work
and persistence are definitely required to gain affluent wealth and an admiring outlook. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I personally insist on the saying, Linking Words
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that hard
work
is the fruit of success.Use synonyms
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