You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
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letter to inform you regarding
a
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item lost
in
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on
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the
train
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. I was going to Amritsar to dehli with my family
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November . I collect a
camera
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for
photos
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shots in better places
dehli
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Dehli
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. It is
cannon
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a cannon
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12.5 latest model
camera
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with cover and 62
gb
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GB
Gb
memory card .
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, the
train
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was stop the
chandigarh
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Chandigarh
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city in 10 minutes.
Me
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and my
famy
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family
members go
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outside
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out side
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outside
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tha
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the
trAin
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some eat the food because all members are hangry but my small stop there he came only 1
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out the
train
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. He
was went
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back he saw that
camera
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is
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there all the members are fell starch because it prices too much. 
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,I
was ask
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someone
in
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the
train
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but any more saw
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kind of happened. You will take action and contact all the employees there working on
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day . Because
it
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very important for me and all the memories in
this
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camera
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thankyou
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,
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Your
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sincerely, Dharma
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable
  • distinguishing features
  • route
  • carriage
  • seat number
  • lost and found department
  • appropriate steps
  • contact information
  • swift and positive action
  • item of value
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