The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams present the life cycle of the
salmon
which is a large fish species.
Overall
,
salmon
have an average lifespan of nine years and their life cycle consists of four main stages: egg, fry, smolt and adult.
While
in the first three
stages
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salmon
live in freshwater, in the
last
stage they place in saline water. The life cycle of
salmon
begins when eggs are laid among small stones at the base of reeds
in
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the upper side of the river, where the waves are slow. After approximately 5 to 6 months, fry which measures 3-8 cm long can be seen in the water.
Then
the fry sail to the lower and faster side of the river. After growing and feeding here for almost 4 years, they reach 12 to 15 centimetres and are considered as smolt. they
then
head to the ocean where they grow into adult
salmon
which
is measure
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70 to 76 centimetres. They spend around 5 years over there, after which they migrate upstream to the birthplace to spawn. The entire journey is repeated all over again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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