Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in- store shopping . this a positive or negative development?

It is true that shopping has become more popular due to the arrival of new technology , online shopping benefit

time

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saving , discount ,

veraity

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veracity

of

produch

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product

. One of the most important

benefit

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benefits

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of doing shopping

from

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the

internet

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is that one can save

time

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and energy because the customer

not

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require

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to go to

store

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the store

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and

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, they can save their valuable

time

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and energy.when someone does purchase from the market , they suppose to spend a whole day,

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. I usually do shopping mostly

via

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online these days so that

i

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can save plenty of

time

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which can use for other work at home.

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, the person can easily keep their precious

time

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in

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internet

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shopping without going out. Another key

advantages

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is that people can save

their

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huge

amount

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amounts

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of money if they do online shopping.

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,no need to spend any extra amount for transportation by purchasing any items, from some

website

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websites

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india

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India

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, people spend

much

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on transport to go shopping in the market.

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is clear that online shopping always provides a number of benefits in

ones

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daily life.

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, online shopping

some

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sometimes

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time

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adversely

affect

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the people they maybe wait for many days to receive their product

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there is

chance

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a chance

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of

damage

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the product while transferring it. So it is a great impact that the customer who always rely on

internet

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buying. In conclusion, both

way

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ways

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of shopping have

a

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apply

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positive and negative side

effect

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effects

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,

i

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feel that

internet

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shopping is far better than store buying owing to

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its

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greater

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a greater

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advantage.