Nowadays online shopping has become more popular than in- store shopping . this a positive or negative development?

It is true that shopping has become more popular due to the arrival of new technology , online shopping benefit
time
saving , discount ,
veraity
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veracity
of
produch
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product
. One of the most important
benefit
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benefits
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of doing shopping
from
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on
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the
internet
is that one can save
time
and energy because the customer
not
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is not
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require
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requires
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to go to
store
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the store
a store
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and
therefore
, they can save their valuable
time
and energy.when someone does purchase from the market , they suppose to spend a whole day,
for example
. I usually do shopping mostly
via
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online these days so that
i
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I
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can save plenty of
time
which can use for other work at home.
Consequently
, the person can easily keep their precious
time
in
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on
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internet
shopping without going out. Another key
advantages
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is that people can save
their
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huge
amount
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amounts
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of money if they do online shopping.
First
,no need to spend any extra amount for transportation by purchasing any items, from some
website
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websites
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. For instance , in my country In
india
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India
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, people spend
much
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apply
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on transport to go shopping in the market.
Thus
this
is clear that online shopping always provides a number of benefits in
ones
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one's
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daily life.
However
, online shopping
some
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sometimes
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time
adversely
affect
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affects
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the people they maybe wait for many days to receive their product
also
there is
chance
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a chance
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of
damage
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damaging
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the product while transferring it. So it is a great impact that the customer who always rely on
internet
buying. In conclusion, both
way
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ways
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of shopping have
a
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apply
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positive and negative side
effect
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effects
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,
i
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I
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feel that
internet
shopping is far better than store buying owing to
it's
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its
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greater
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a greater
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advantage.
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