In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to larger shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. In this a positive or negative development?

These days, many people

tent

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tend

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to

shopping

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shop

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from

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in

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enormous shopping

malls

or mega

malls

. It is

advantage

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an advantage

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progress

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to progress

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. Because they could be buying everything which

need

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needs

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without

go

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going

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out

from

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to

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the shopping mall. But it has some disadvantages for local

stores

. The main reason, for shopping

from

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in

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mega

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mega-malls

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malls

is

the

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that

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people could be buying everything that they need in them.

Also

, there are many varieties of clothes and equipment, so the adults could save their money and

time

.

For example

, in my city, there are some shopping

centers

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centres

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and one of them is near

of

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apply

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my home. It has many

stores

for buying and food curt for drinking and eating. When I wanted to go

parties

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to parties

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or other ceremonies, I can

to

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apply

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buy everything which I need

such

as clothes, shoes, scarves, or other stuff.

Besides

, there is a big

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supermarket

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super market

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supermarket

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under it, So I can buy

daily

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it daily

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from it.

at

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apply

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many times, I could

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be competitive

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competitive

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compete

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in it and I do not waste my

time

.

On the other hand

, many ordinary sellers who

has

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have

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a store

near

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nearby

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by

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these places could not

competitive

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compete

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with mega

malls

,

then

, after a while, their business was broken.

In around

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our shopping mall, many

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supermarkets

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super markets

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supermarkets

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and some

stores

for

this

result were broken.

Moreover

, the sellers do their best but in my

town

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,town

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the number of unemployment is increasing.

However

, some people say that

,

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shopping

malls

and mega

malls

are the best places for shopping or

spend

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spending

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time

with friends, but we should support our local

stores

,

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because they need their job for

living

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a living

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. In conclusion, we should be buying from local's

shop

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shops

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because they need their job and do not

abilities

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able

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to

competitive

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compete

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with enormous

malls

. Sometimes, when we do not

more

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have more

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time

for shopping

clothes

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for clothes

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or other stuff, is better

go

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to go

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shopping

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to shopping

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centers

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centres

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and completive many stuff by

color

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colour

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and cost and

then

by them.