In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to larger shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. In this a positive or negative development?
These days, many people
tent
to Correct your spelling
tend
shopping
Wrong verb form
shop
from
enormous shopping Change preposition
in
malls
or mega malls
. It is advantage
Correct article usage
an advantage
progress
. Because they could be buying everything which Fix the infinitive
to progress
need
without Change the verb form
needs
go
out Change the form of the verb
going
from
the shopping mall. But it has some disadvantages for local Change preposition
to
stores
.
The main reason, for shopping from
Change preposition
in
mega
Add a hyphen
mega-malls
malls
is the
people could be buying everything that they need in them. Correct your spelling
that
Also
, there are many varieties of clothes and equipment, so the adults could save their money and time
. For example
, in my city, there are some shopping centers
and one of them is near Change the spelling
centres
of
my home. It has many Change preposition
apply
stores
for buying and food curt for drinking and eating. When I wanted to go parties
or other ceremonies, I can Change preposition
to parties
to
buy everything which I need Fix the infinitive
apply
such
as clothes, shoes, scarves, or other stuff. Besides
, there is a big Correct your spelling
supermarket
super market
under it, So I can buy Correct your spelling
supermarket
daily
from it.Correct pronoun usage
it daily
at
many times, I could Change preposition
apply
Add a missing verb
be competitive
competitive
in it and I do not waste my Replace the word
compete
time
.
On the other hand
, many ordinary sellers who has
a store Change the verb form
have
near
Correct your spelling
nearby
by
these places could not Change preposition
apply
competitive
with mega Replace the word
compete
malls
, then
, after a while, their business was broken. In around
our shopping mall, many Change preposition
Around
Correct your spelling
supermarkets
super markets
and some Correct your spelling
supermarkets
stores
for this
result were broken. Moreover
, the sellers do their best but in my town
the number of unemployment is increasing.
Add a comma
,town
However
, some people say that,
shopping Remove the comma
apply
malls
and mega malls
are the best places for shopping or spend
Wrong verb form
spending
time
with friends, but we should support our local stores
,
because they need their job for Remove the comma
apply
living
.
In conclusion, we should be buying from local's Add an article
a living
shop
because they need their job and do not Fix the agreement mistake
shops
abilities
to Replace the word
able
competitive
with enormous Replace the word
compete
malls
. Sometimes, when we do not more
Add a missing verb
have more
time
for shopping clothes
or other stuff, is better Change preposition
for clothes
go
Fix the infinitive
to go
shopping
Change preposition
to shopping
centers
and completive many stuff by Change the spelling
centres
color
and cost and Change the spelling
colour
then
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