A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject.

Dear Raj, I hope you are in a good health and spirit. I felt great to receive your letter to seek advice about the master of business administration from
London
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college of business. The college offers MBA in three different streams finance, human resource and marketing. I had done my master's in Finance.
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course has 4 terms of 6 months each and in , adding a 6 weeks compulsory internship in an organisation related to your field and fees was about GBP 5000 per term which includes hostel charge. The university is one of the top elite colleges
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London and
faculty
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of it has in-depth knowledge about their subjects
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moreover
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regular ,intervals there are assignments which
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the student to inculcate cognitive and analytical skills. You can apply to the college via the online website by paying GBP 100 and they will take a mock test in which you will be assessed for admission. Hopefully,
this
will clear all your doubts and if any
further
advice you want to seek, kindly call me any time during weekends. Take care and stay healthy. Yours lovingly, John
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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