These days children place a premium on eating and having fun. But their
Eating
habits and lifestyles Fix capitalization
eating
has
changed beyond recognition. some people think that Change the verb form
have
this
way of life will be having an ill effect on their health, while others argue that it is ok. In my Linking Words
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has
dire consequences on their body.
To advance a convincing theory I could deal with, fast foods. These days fast foods have come under fire because they are unhealthy. It is plain to see, younger people prefer junk foods as a meal. On the grounds that they are delicious and can be prepared in less than an hour. Due to the busy days, they don’t have enough time to cook. Change the verb form
have
In addition
to what I have just said, most of the snacks that they have during the day, are not healthy. Linking Words
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, vegetables, fruits and etcetera are omitted from their eating plan. Another feature which I should mention is excursing. Linking Words
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of technology, teenagers spend Add an article
the advent
fewer
time on outdoor activities likeCorrect quantifier usage
less
,
cycling, walking, Remove the comma
apply
mountain
climbing. Going to Correct word choice
and mountain
gym
is essential in case to have a powerful body. If we don’t have the routine to Add an article
the gym
excursice
, when we get older we will have weak muscles and Correct your spelling
excursion
bons
at an early age. They are all contributing factors.
Correct your spelling
bones
Although
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this
lifestyle is harmful, new pills have been invented that can cover, Linking Words
lack
of vitamins and nutrients.
To conclude, our health is really important if we want to live longer.Correct article usage
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