Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?
Most people would say that the present
time
is the best time
to be alive despite of
others thinking that the best Remove the preposition
apply
time
was far far away , in some century in the history. In my opinion, nowadays, the
humanity has a lot more to do Correct article usage
apply
comparing
with our grandparents, which Wrong verb form
compared
has
less Correct subject-verb agreement
have
attribuition
to do. Correct your spelling
attribution
This
essay, it
will discuss the most interesting things Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
living today and compare Change preposition
about
with
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it with
an
ancient Correct article usage
apply
time
.
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times
A
long Change preposition
For a
time
, our ancients, has no spare time
at all, during their daily activity. Most of them need to work in a far, making their own food, take care animals
, look after relatives and keep working done day-by-day for their Change preposition
of animals
sustainable
. At that Replace the word
sustainability
time
, money it
wasn´t Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
important Correct word choice
as
how
is today which could make life simple even in a rush Correct word choice
as how
daily
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of daily
activity
. Some points at Fix the agreement mistake
activities
this
time
could be more attractive than today, for instance
, lay
down to Wrong verb form
lying
contamplete
the sunrise, fishing, Correct your spelling
contemplate
stay
outlander and Wrong verb form
staying
sorrounded
by nature everywhere.
Correct your spelling
surrounded
However
, at the present time
, the
humanity Correct article usage
apply
keep
on Change the verb form
keeps
the
insane routine and still has no extra Correct article usage
an
time
to afford a relaxing time
. Doing a
work, cooking Correct article usage
apply
a
food, Correct article usage
apply
look
after Wrong verb form
looking
a children
and exercising could be more attractive with Correct the article-noun agreement
children
a child
the
Correct article usage
apply
eletronic
devices. Correct your spelling
electronic
By
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In
time
, we can clean our home using robots, we can look after children through the internet and cooking using an Add an article
the time
eletronic
pan. At Correct your spelling
electronic
this
point
we deny Add a comma
,point
in
doing daily function in other to stay less with our Change preposition
apply
familie
or even with ourselves. Correct your spelling
families
Then
, money is so important that can Replace the word
buy
by
everything to facilitate routine.
In my Correct your spelling
be
opinion
the past Add a comma
,opinion
time
seems to be more interesting to live in due to the time
spending
on you or in that really make sense. Our ancient knows exactly how to deserve a good quality of life.Replace the word
spent
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