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In the past, people ate local in-season food, but now people tend to consume out-of-season food from different parts of the world. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In ancient times people tend to
ate
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 locally produced seasonal foods, but presently it changed to consuming internationally available seasonal
food
 for eating.
This
 essay illustrates that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits which will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs. The drawbacks in
ancient
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 era where scarcity of locally available
fruits
 and vegetables makes people
to
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borrow from other parts of the world.
This
 is because
of
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people
having
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 more addiction to different types of particular seasonal foods from other nations
provides
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 the opportunity to feel the
taste
.
Additionally
,
this
 creates the ruling body to provide additional financial funds for importing
the
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goods from different parts of the planet.
As a result
 of
this
process
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 high burden of taxes
need
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 to pay off at every period of
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 by
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society.
For example
,
in
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Srilanka due to
non-availability
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the non-availability
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 of seasonal
fruits
 like
strawberry
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strawberries
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 need to import from Switzerland by paying double taxes on importing to the country.
However
, the advantage of consuming
food
of
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internationally
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 cuisines gives the pleasure of tasting
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it at
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at
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on
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 different occasions.
Also
,
as
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a
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locally available
fruits
 and vegetables makes more detrimental
on
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to
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 health
at
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sometimes which prefer to try in
timely
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a timely
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 manner.
Moreover
, frequent
travelers
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 get the notch to
taste
 the different
taste
 buds on
to
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their
tongue
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tongues
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 for
life changing
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 experience. To conclude, the usage of locally produced seasonal
fruits
 and vegetables for consumption in past had changed now to
having
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 international
food
taste
 in their life.
However
, the disadvantages of getting seasonal non-availability materials and financial
in
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stable
condition
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conditions
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 on importing outweigh the advantages of trying different international
food stuff
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foodstuff
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 on particular occasions.
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