A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter: Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why would they be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in giving a talk on an international day. I would like to talk about cultures in Thailand. The topic that I would like to talk about is the basic things that tourists should do or should not do when travelling in Thailand. The reason why I would like to pick

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because it would help and guide everyone who has a plan to go there to behave properly. Sometimes, we realise that we are doing things properly, but others might not think like that

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, you need to wait in a line when waiting for a train, or you should not pass something to someone by using a foot, as Thai people think it is impolite. So,

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will be very helpful

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to get the audience prepared for

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trip.

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, I have a question regarding a talk on that day, as I am wondering if I am required to prepare any PowerPoint slides or leaflets for people who participate in

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event. I look forward to hearing from you. Your Sincerely, Pat Watson

patt.rusrin

Apr 8, 2026

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Task response: You answer all parts, but add a bit more about what topics you will talk about.

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Task response: Use a more polite form for your question, for example: could you please tell me what I need to prepare?

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter is easy to follow, but some long lines can be cut into shorter parts.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Use linking words like also, for example, and finally with care.

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Task response: You cover the three points in the task.

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Task response: Your main idea is clear and useful for students.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

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Coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph has one main idea.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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