Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion

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. It has been claimed that some people think that if you do not have

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of dream or the salary is not high enough there is a chance to change the

situation

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place

, but some of them

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and believe that the best way

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the

situation

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with, I would like to say, that both points of view have grounds to exist. On the one hand, if a person will

tryes

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tries

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to change his

job

and find better conditions, there is a

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to lose the current

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as the current

situation

in the world is not stable.

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, if you stay

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your current

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, there is a possibility to burn out and

may

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be even receive

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depression and start to hate your working

place

for some reasons. And in

this

case, it is worth

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everything. To sum

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I would like to say that everything depends on

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I would try to

risk

everything as I am not the person, who will work somewhere without passion. It is

also

worth

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, that if you don’t

risk

, you will never know.

First

of all, you can start to look for a new

job

without leaving

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current

place

Secondly

, if you are not satisfied with what you are doing for

living

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, try to learn something else, nowadays there are a lot of distant courses for those who want to learn a new profession.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion

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task 2: in some countries, young people have become richer, healthier and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address the problem?

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