many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people ant get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?

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time , the employees satisfying is decreasing in

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their personnel efficiency by wrong decisions .

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building a gym needs to spend so much money .

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, the gyms need a lot of facilities. The most suitable remedy whereby a people could overcome

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of extra work hours for a person who does sport. Another way forward could be to create

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for refreshing and fitness . namely, pool, stadium to play football, and so on. I would like to close my argument

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their people who work to do exercise

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their attitudes. I recommended the companies build a place to do exercise.