Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing [for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras]. In many cases, the people are being monitered are unaware that this is happening. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

The modernistic technological implications are rapidly altering the conventional practices, and monitoring of individuals becomes one

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the contemporary

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. People are being monitored through cell phone trackers,

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, and

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as well as other digital online and offline

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; individuals, in many cases of

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watches are not aware of the phenomenon. These innovative

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measures entail extraordinary advantages including improved public safety and a reduced crime rate that are mandatory for a safe and sound society. I strongly defend the implied advantages of

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pre-eminence over some minor drawbacks. The notion of elevated safety of residents and premises can be deemed as a primary benefit of implementing monitoring measures in public areas. Through

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, people are proffered

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an opportunity to shop, travel,

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, and

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around safely and securely. Most of the culprits, unaware and oblivion about the hidden

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, conduct some suspicious movements and can be caught by the monitoring team without any substantial public harm.

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, PTZ

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can be installed on distinct and concealed places

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as parking lots, crossroads, museums, retail stores, and halls to observe 360 dimensions and

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effective

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solutions, instantaneously. Another considerable advantage that utterly magnifies the imperativeness of monitoring people’s activities in public places is the mitigated crime index.

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cameras

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and other similar

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are generally installed

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unseen and inaccessible spots; the mere fear of being supervised impedes several criminals to commit a felony in the

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place. Take the example of Humboldt Park, Chicago, which recorded a sizeable drop of 20% in the overall rate of crime incidents after the implementation of the practice. Opponents of the stance reflect that the idea of observing people’s activities attributes a few downfalls as well; the inefficacy of

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measures and abuse of information

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the most eminent among all. Denigrating views contend that

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and other similar

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are incapable of impeding all crimes, and

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, are ineffective;

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, the monitoring team can misuse the recorded data for unfair purposes.

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setbacks, though carry minimum viability and can be pragmatically controlled through the intervention of adequate administrative strategies. To conclude, the practice of monitoring people through different

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and tracking

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is laden with an increased sense of

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and sound communal premises. The associated insignificant reservations can be solved through deliberate and adequate interventions and can optimize the overall scope of gaining.