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Some people think that the teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or they are most interested in. To what extent do you agree?

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While some people believe that adolescent should focus on all
subjects
 at school, others think that they should only spend time on the
subject
 they excel at or has the most interest in. I agree partially that
teenagers
 should allocate more time to the
subject
 they like, but other
subjects
 must not be neglected.
Firstly
, most
teenagers
 are not mature enough to make their own decisions on which
subject
 to be focused on. They do not know what they are truly good at, or how long could they stay interested in
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 particular
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.
This
 is why the age to enter college is around 17, as it is the age where people are mature enough to decide which
subjects
 would truly help them to enter the desired professions.
Secondly
, each
subject
 trains
students
 to think from different aspects.
For example
,
mathemathics
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mathematics
 trains
students
 to think in terms of statistics and percentage, while language classes train
students
 to think creatively in essay writing.
Thus
, it is important for
students
 to understand all disciplines in order to see the world from different perspectives.
On the other hand
,
teenagers
 would enjoy the learning process more by studying the
subject
 they like the most. The joy of learning would motivate
students
 to study more, allowing them to build a strong foundation in the particular course and eventually pushing them in becoming the professions related to that
stubject
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subject
. In conclusion, I believe that
teenagers
 should study all
subjects
 and make the final decision when they are mature enough, but it would be a good idea to pursue
further
 learning in the
subject
 they like to make learning a fun journey.
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