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You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

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I am writing from Loreal to highlight some concerns regarding a recent corporate event that you managed for us at Hotel Indiana from the 11th to the 15th of May.
This
 company gathering was our annual Strategy days meeting which is very crucial for our business. Each day we had some technical presentations and discussions for 4 hours in the banquet hall 2. As communicated with you a strong internet connection was one of the
first
 requirements. We found the hotel services very unprofessional. Their wifi connection was extremely poor due to which we could not communicate with our remote employees and clients. Due to
this
, we couldn’t conduct our gathering the way we wanted it to be and we had to leave out so many things. I would like you to take appropriate action and
also
 provide us with some refund amount as our requirements were not met completely.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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