The use of phones,tablets, and other devices while walking in public places has been a concern for many commentators. What hazards can arise if people are guided by such devices when walking down the street? How could these problems can be solved?

It is often argued that using digital

gadgets

while walking is a major issue nowadays and

this

kind

of act can

consequently

lead to a significant number of problems.

This

essay will discuss the hazards caused by

this

and what

kind

of

meaures

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measures

can be taken to resolve

this

problem.

To begin

with, it is not uncommon that

people

frequently

use

devices

such

as mobiles and tablets while walking these days. One of the major

consequence

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consequences

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of

persuaing

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persuading

pursuing

this

kind

of act which can be

life threatening

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roadside

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accidents.

In addition

to

this

, it has

also

led to a substantial increase in the crime rate

such

as robbery and

child

kidnapping. To illustrate, in a recent study conducted in Mumbai on

child

trafficking, in

majority

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the majority

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of the cases the reason behind

child

kidnapping was found to be

negligience

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negligence

negligent

of the

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caretaker

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care taker

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as they were busy with their

gadgets

at the time when

crime

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the crime

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was

commited

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committed

by the criminal.

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using these

devices

have

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many detrimental effects.

On the other hand

, many measures can be

taking

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so that

this

issue can be sorted out.

Firstly

, the governing bodies should make strict laws so that

people

should be restricted to

use

smartphones or other

gadgets

while walking

such

as imposing fines or in form of any

kind

of punishment.

For instance

, in Korea

law makers

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lawmakers

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have started taking huge

fine

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fines

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from the citizens if they are observed using any of the

gadgets

specifically on the walking pathways.

Moreover

,

people

should be guided not to

use

these

devices

on the streets through the way of the media to create awareness.

Hence

with the combined efforts of the government and

individuals

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this

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issue

can be resolved. To conclude, many problems

such

as road accidents, thefts and

child

kidnapping

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kidnappings

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can arise if

people

are not forbidden to

use

electronic

devices

while walking.

Therefore

, with the cumulative efforts of both the

people

and governing bodies

this

matter can be sorted out for the betterment of a nation.