In many countries, paying for things using mobile phones(cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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advent of technology,

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life

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are

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more

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easier and

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more convenience

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convenience

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.

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, in many countries, buying

for

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the

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things using mobile payments

are

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being influenced dramatically among the

people

. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides

of

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advantages

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the advantages

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and disadvantages

for

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of

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this

development. On the one hand, contactless payments are the

advantages

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advantage

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for buying things. To elaborate

further

,

people

can buy their household chores and other stuff

from

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online due to it is easier to make a

transcation

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transaction

. Regardless of

this

contactless

payment

, there is no need to worry about

to lose

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your money and it does not have to carry a huge amount of money with us.

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, if we forgot to bring our

wallet

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wallets

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at

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home

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, we can eat at

restaurant

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a restaurant

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and

then

make a

payment

through

mobile

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a mobile

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phone application. Not only it is easier to make

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a payment

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payment

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payments

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but

also

it is

convienient

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convenient

.

On the other hand

, there is a major downside

from

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using

this

kind of

transcation

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transaction

which

revolve

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revolves

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around its safety. It is easier to hack the account once you made the

transcations

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transactions

transaction

as the server stores all of our data.

Moreover

, the scam

people

immitate

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imitate

our profile

consequently

they are cheated other

people

's money and they can

be pretend

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to us. But, sometimes we did not

made

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the

payment

directly, they can hack our data. It is the disadvantage of mobile phones application.

Finally

, I believe that

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critique elucidated the virtues and hiccups of using mobile phone apps.

Depsite

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Despite

the fact that I am profoundly

convined

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convinced

convened

that the pros of

this

phenomenon overshadow the cons.