Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal,some people,however,think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern era, Economic growth is much needed
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other developments
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as education, infrastructure and medical facilities as well.
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, a fair amount of experts believe that any growth is determined by a good budget and facilities. I would like to discuss and express my viewpoints on the given statement.
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, without the best economic plan, nothing can be done.
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, how do we get enough roads and public building construction without substantial
money
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support?
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, to start any development activity in the town local government must be required to have a strong financial system. If not, execution may be delayed.
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, considering the present situation in the country, everything is
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associated with money only.
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, payments to vendors as they are supplying basic food items to those who are in the
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income category.As per recent Google survey findings, 90% of public demands and daily needs can only be achieved by huge budgets and economic programs.
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, undoubtedly, the government has to give equal priority to other developments as well. Especially health and education systems need to be developed across the country.
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, proper roads and buildings are
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helpful to develop the basic infrastructure. If the government
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to focus on only financial plans and policies
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it may turn into a big crisis as the rest of the activities are ignored.
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, no matter what kind of financial system they have. It is all about the whole country's growth and national development. The economy has to develop along other sectors are well which always goof to the nation and everyone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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