In some countries , the unemployment is high, therefore, some people think children should study only primary education and not secondary education as because they cannot find jobs in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some members of society that children should start seeking work as soon as they end up in primary school as there is a serious lack of workplaces in some regions and even many graduates who have a secondary education can not find a job. In my opinion, it is much better to continue studying after primary institution.
First of all, at young ages, people are not sufficiently educated, so it is hard for them to find work they can cope with.
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, there is a large number of restrictions on child labour Linking Words
consequently
youngsters can not accomplish hard work and Linking Words
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promoted
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apply
higher positioned
jobs as they are still inexperienced. Add a hyphen
higher-positioned
For instance
, if there is a choice between a young person who possesses less knowledge and Linking Words
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second candidate who has a secondary education, every reasonable manager will choose the individual with more knowledge. Correct article usage
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, a large number of youngsters stay without a job Linking Words
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education.
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Moreover
, youngsters are mostly irresponsible and may refer to their Linking Words
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insufficiently seriously. The people who just finished Fix the agreement mistake
obligations
primary
course are younger than fifteen years old, Correct pronoun usage
their primary
while
it is the age when human starts to fully realize what he is doing and be responsible for everything he does. Linking Words
For example
, it can be observed even Linking Words
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children's rate of doing homework at school which is generally quite low. It results in many people being rejected by managers and remaining unemployed
In conclusion, I believe that it is better to fully accomplish the school program before seeking a job. It significantly increases the chances Change preposition
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to be
employed because every director chooses a more acknowledged and responsible person.Change preposition
of being
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