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Advantages And Disadvantages of Home Schooling And Regular Schooling

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The mode of
education
 is seeing a see-change. Even though
This
 mode is quite popular among many
parents
, My views don’t stand with
this
. I still think the conventional mode is
education
 is far better for a plethora of reasons. The same will be elaborated on in the upcoming passages. A school’s environment can help children develop various
skills
. If a child is meeting a bunch of other students and teachers, on a daily basis
then
 it is certainly going to help him / her groom. The child will not only develop social
skills
 but
also
 communication and team building as well. Those
skills
 need to be mastered along with
education
.
For example
, During the corona pandemic, many toddlers/ preschoolers couldn’t attend school resulting in speech delay or social anxiety.
On the contrary
, Some
parents
 prefer homeschooling for various reasons. The
parents
 have in-depth knowledge about the child’s progress, and the
parents
 are very well aware of where the child stands and what areas
which
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need attention. Not only that, But homeschooling is flexible as well as saves commuting time too. To conclude, The home school could be better due to its own perk. But traditional way schooling shouldn’t be ignored as it helps developed numerous
skills
 which are needed in day to day life apart from
education
.
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