In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving this message?Write 250 words.

Many people argued that, in some

society

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,

children

are often encourage

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that they can pursue anything if they work hard enough.

Although

there

some

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are some

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benefits,

such

as building self-confidence and

optimistic

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optimism

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, there are drawbacks that will be

expplained

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explained

in the following paragraphs.

First

of all, self-confidence and

optimistic

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optimism

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can be

develop

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at the early stage of

children

. Self-confidence is very important in

children

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life so they acknowledge what

their

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they're

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capable of.

For example

, when they study hard for their exam, they will confident enough to nail the test. Optimism personality should be

also

inserted

in

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every

children

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daily life so they can

enconter

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encounter

enter

the challenge they face on. Optimistic

children

can solve all of their problems with a smile on their

face

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. Building confidence and optimism is an excellent idea for developing their personality traits.

However

, there are

also

major disadvantages for the

children

if they

taking

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this

too far.

Children

will become too ambitious

and

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makes

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it very hard for

themselves

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to accept failure. For illustration,

children

will try to do anything to receive good grades even if it means

to cheat

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on their

test

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.

This

happen

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because they can't accept failure. Even though

,

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it's good to have high ambition, sometimes there are times when people need to accept the result even if it means they failed. To sum it up,

eventhough

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even though

there are some drawbacks

by

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recommending

this

statement like having too much ambition and barely

recognized

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their failure, it

also

have

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it's

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its

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benefits like good confidence and optimistic character.