‘Power tends to corrupt, and absolute power corrupts absolutely.’ (John Dalberg-Acton) Explain the reasoning behind this statement. Argue that power does not necessarily degrade or weaken the morals of those who hold it. To what extent is it possible for someone to hold power without using it for their own personal gain?

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The statement suggests that having
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to take advantage of
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for personal
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, politically, socially, financially, etc, known as
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and that the more
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because it provides
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for personal
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increases. It is possible Dalberg meant that the very
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itself does not cause
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to those
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seek personal
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at the cost of others, and by
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logic, those who do not wish
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without taking advantage of it.
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idea is echoed widely in our society, as many altruistic groups are providing many opportunities to seek financial
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money to Covid patients in India, rather than taking it for themselves, as an example of simple altruism.
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the CEO of a successful company paying as little as possible to workers, while taking all they can spare for themselves. There are so many cases of
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greed, that it is proof enough that the chance provided by
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is so tempting to anyone that it leads to
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corruption
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so many
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are vigilant to
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by those in
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– effectively removing the
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afforded by the
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, re-affirming the idea that when
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power
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does not corrupt, it’s because the
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to be corrupt is not there – as in the case of charities, where books are scrupulously checked and kept, and criminal charges are threatened to those who are corrupt here. In conclusion, I believe that Dalberg-Acton suggests that
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over
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, money and resources, provides
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for financial
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to those willing to take it, and
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becomes more tempting with more
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is not universal and there are examples where
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hold
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and don’t manipulate it – but
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is due to genuine altruism, and accountability in many cases.

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