There are now many different kinds of internet sites and apps offering medical advice, but they all share one thing in common: they do more harm than good. Why might online sources of medical advice be said to "do more harm than good'? Present a counter-argument. To what extent do you agree with the statement?

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I truly disagree with the
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"they do more
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than good", as there were not enough premises to claim that they really do more
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. Internet sites and medical apps
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for the same purpose
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they have nothing in common.
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society
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beliefs, there are only a few people believe that online sources of medical advice could bring
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to them. Today, those digital
platforms
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are intensely controlled by the legal act. Since
establishment
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of relevant laws, the platform developers are required to make sure that the software systems are working in the appropriate manner. The
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can be true only in case of the
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fault, as some users may intentionally use the platform in commercial ways
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of
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their own benefit.
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,
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online digital
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can do
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in
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way.
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but not least, even the online
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could do
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. The
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' advantages in
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of comfortability, accessibility, swiftness, eventually a social-distancing. These advantages are far beyond the implicit
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,
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, the
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may be false.
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, I totally disagree with the
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despite the platform could do
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in
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manner. But we have nothing to do with it since the advantages from
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are too strong to
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minimal
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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