You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

Dear Mr John We had a great conversation at the
last
conference, I appreciate all the efforts that you put to make it successful.
However
, there is a scope to improve accommodation facilities. The Summit was conducted in the Aviva conference room at Start hotel the
last
Sunday at 9:00 am in the morning which was a crucial client meeting to demonstrate one of our health care products. I faced a couple of issues during my stay. The internet was frequently disconnected due to which I was not able to download my presentation on the company website.
In addition
, the room service staff did not supply drinking water which is an annoying experience. Be that as it may, I would like to suggest you ensure going forward we check the internet connection ahead of the schedule, and
also
make appropriate arrangements to supply enough drinking water for all the delegates. I hope you consider my suggestions and take appropriate action. Your's Sincerely, Rana, Anh
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