Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
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lifestyle
life
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lifestyle
style
is followed by significant numbers of people
in spite of having a plethora of workout academies in this
modern world. This
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.
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past faced era. To elaborate it, nowadays a majority of folks have to work for long hours they could not find enough time for joining gym
and they lead to inactive Add an article
a gym
the gym
life
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lifestyle
style
, and therefore
they become not only obese but also
have to suffer some detrimental disease. Moreover
, they may not maintain the fitness level
of their bodies. For instance
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being overweight
masses
do not show greater interest Correct article usage
the masses
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joining Change preposition
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gym
. Add an article
a gym
the gym
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, they have addiction
to Add an article
an addiction
enjoy
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enjoying
motionless
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a motionless
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lifestyle
life
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lifestyle
style
without participating in physical activities. To address this
, people
should come to know about the consequences of health
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health-hazardous
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by Replace the word
hazards
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seminars Correct your spelling
organising
organizing
by
locally as well globally and Change preposition
apply
this
practice can motivate them to join workout academy
.
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academies
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problem that any nation can not progress in the all fields of its individuals are facing illnesses of account of obese. To explicate it, the Add an article
a later
the later
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span
human's
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humans
have
declined as per expected Correct subject-verb agreement
has
level
as people
feel hasitate
to do physical activities and Correct your spelling
hesitate
also
not ready to pay fees at the gym for maintaining fitness. For example
, 7 out of 10 people
are not excersied
at gyms, owing to its high cost. Correct your spelling
exercised
Hence
, masses
give more priority to Correct article usage
the masses
steady
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a steady
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lifestyle
life
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lifestyle
style
rather than doing Add an article
the workout
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workout
. To tackle Fix the agreement mistake
workouts
this
, prices should be reasonable for participating in gyms so that whether lower
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lower-level
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class as
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or
middle
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middle-level
level
class people
might join them.
In conclusion, although
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lifestyle
life
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lifestyle
style
leds
to huge negative impacts on Correct your spelling
leads
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human's
health yet it can be overcome by staying aware Change noun form
human
people
to
regarding health Change preposition
apply
illness
with along organising seminars and reducing Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
joing
fees of gyms.Correct your spelling
joining
joint
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