Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is ? what measures can governments take to discorage people from using their cars?

In the past three decades, there has been a significant rise in the number of private vehicles which has

consequently

led to

traffic

jams. In my opinion, it is completely true and

therefore

, various measures should be taken by the governing bodies so that

this

problem

can be mitigated. It is not uncommon, these days that every family has more than one personal

car

.

This

is perhaps due to

an

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increased affordability of the

people

to buy more vehicles.

Moreover

, due to

easy

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availability of

car

loans from the banks in most

of

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the

cities

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it is now easy and convenient for individuals to purchase automobiles by paying monthly

installments

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. To illustrate, in a recent study conducted in Korea, it was found that, there has been a

two fold

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increase in

the

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car

ownership in

the

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urban areas nowadays as compared to the past because of better paying capacities and raised standards of living of

people

in the cities.

However

, many measures can be taken by the government to sort out

this

problem

. One of the best

way

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to overcome

this

issue is the enhancement

in

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the public transport system.

For instance

, Delhi is one of the major cities in India and is known for huge

traffic

jams. But with the introduction of the Delhi metro which is a railway transport system

this

problem

has been solved to some extent.

This

is because commuters prefer to use

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instead

of their cars as it is

time saving

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and

in addition

to

this

it is cheaper

also

. Other than

this

, authorities should impose strict

traffic

rules so that

this

issue can be worked out.

Moreover

,

government

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with the support of the mass media should create awareness among

people

regarding the drawbacks of heavy

traffic

jams on road. To conclude, undoubtedly, there has been a substantial rise in the

car

buying capacity of the

people

nowadays in comparison to the past due to more income and better living

standars

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standards

in the city.

Nevertheless

, many measures can be implemented by the governing bodies to overcome

this

problem

for

betterment

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of the nation as well as

citizens

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.