Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is ? what measures can governments take to discorage people from using their cars?

In the past three decades, there has been a significant rise in the number of private vehicles which has

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led to

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jams. In my opinion, it is completely true and

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, various measures should be taken by the governing bodies so that

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problem

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can be mitigated. It is not uncommon, these days that every family has more than one personal

car

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.

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is perhaps due to

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increased affordability of the

people

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to buy more vehicles.

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, due to

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availability of

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loans from the banks in most

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the

cities

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it is now easy and convenient for individuals to purchase automobiles by paying monthly

installments

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. To illustrate, in a recent study conducted in Korea, it was found that, there has been a

two fold

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increase in

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car

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ownership in

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urban areas nowadays as compared to the past because of better paying capacities and raised standards of living of

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in the cities.

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, many measures can be taken by the government to sort out

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problem

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to overcome

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issue is the enhancement

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the public transport system.

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, Delhi is one of the major cities in India and is known for huge

traffic

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jams. But with the introduction of the Delhi metro which is a railway transport system

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problem

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has been solved to some extent.

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is because commuters prefer to use

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instead

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of their cars as it is

time saving

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and

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to

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it is cheaper

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. Other than

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, authorities should impose strict

traffic

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rules so that

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issue can be worked out.

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,

government

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with the support of the mass media should create awareness among

people

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regarding the drawbacks of heavy

traffic

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jams on road. To conclude, undoubtedly, there has been a substantial rise in the

car

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buying capacity of the

people

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nowadays in comparison to the past due to more income and better living

standars

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standards

in the city.

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, many measures can be implemented by the governing bodies to overcome

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problem

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for

betterment

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of the nation as well as

citizens

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