Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is ? what measures can governments take to discorage people from using their cars?

In the past three decades, there has been a significant rise in the number of private vehicles which has
consequently
led to
traffic
jams. In my opinion, it is completely true and
therefore
, various measures should be taken by the governing bodies so that
this
problem
can be mitigated. It is not uncommon, these days that every family has more than one personal
car
.
This
is perhaps due to
an
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increased affordability of the
people
to buy more vehicles.
Moreover
, due to
easy
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availability of
car
loans from the banks in most
of
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the
cities
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it is now easy and convenient for individuals to purchase automobiles by paying monthly
installments
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. To illustrate, in a recent study conducted in Korea, it was found that, there has been a
two fold
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increase in
the
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car
ownership in
the
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urban areas nowadays as compared to the past because of better paying capacities and raised standards of living of
people
in the cities.
However
, many measures can be taken by the government to sort out
this
problem
. One of the best
way
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to overcome
this
issue is the enhancement
in
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the public transport system.
For instance
, Delhi is one of the major cities in India and is known for huge
traffic
jams. But with the introduction of the Delhi metro which is a railway transport system
this
problem
has been solved to some extent.
This
is because commuters prefer to use
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instead
of their cars as it is
time saving
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and
in addition
to
this
it is cheaper
also
. Other than
this
, authorities should impose strict
traffic
rules so that
this
issue can be worked out.
Moreover
,
government
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with the support of the mass media should create awareness among
people
regarding the drawbacks of heavy
traffic
jams on road. To conclude, undoubtedly, there has been a substantial rise in the
car
buying capacity of the
people
nowadays in comparison to the past due to more income and better living
standars
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standards
in the city.
Nevertheless
, many measures can be implemented by the governing bodies to overcome
this
problem
for
betterment
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of the nation as well as
citizens
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its citizens
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.
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