Some people think that the best way to stay fit is joining a gym or health clubs. While others think That doing everyday activities such as walking or climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both aspects give Your Own opinion
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think that gym is the best way to stay healthy while Add an article
the crowd
on the other hand
, some crowd are of opinion that daytoday
activities like walking,climbing stairs are the best way for staying fit. While there are different views that have been formulated on Correct your spelling
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topic, lets
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To begin
with, There have been different fitness
centers
and Change the spelling
centres
the
gyms that have outgrown in number in Correct article usage
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past
few decades. Correct article usage
the past
Although
people
have remained fit in older generations as well when the fitness
industry was still evolving. Fitness
centers
are not a Change the spelling
centres
neccesity
to stay fit. There are still many remote places where only limited Correct your spelling
necessity
fitness
facilities are available but people
certainly maintain a healthy lifestyle. For example
, many villages in remote places dont
have gym Correct your spelling
don't
centers
but are quite active due to Change the spelling
centres
lot
of physical Correct article usage
a lot
exercises
in agriculture
sector or their daily routine work.
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the agriculture
However
, some people
require motivation to remain healthy. Herewith, comes the role of fitness
clubs & their coaches. These clubs maintain an
energy in gyms to Remove the article
apply
workout
, so someone who is not motivated Correct your spelling
work out
also
feels working
out more often. Change preposition
like working
Secondly
, fitness
industries have now invented more techniques in the form of different exercises
so there are many choices for people
in health clubs, to give some examples they
are pilates, Correct pronoun usage
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zumba
, yoga, water yoga, weight training etc.
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Zumba
People
can enjoy while
they are Correct pronoun usage
themselves while
also
staying fit. Although
, Gym centers
are not necessary to stay fit Change the spelling
centres
but
In my opinion, Gyming Remove the conjunction
apply
centers
now have more interesting Change the spelling
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exercises
to stay fit rather than traditional exercises
like walking and climbing.Submitted by akanshasrivastav137 on
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