“Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

The number of capital punishments across the globe

are

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gradually decreasing as some lawmakers are doing amendments to convert the death penalty

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life time

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sentence.

However

, I believe that

such

deadly punishments should be continued to combat

terrorism

and violence.

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with, one of

concerns

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for many governments is

terrorism

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can be controlled only with cruel laws

this

is because terror groups are always a greater threat

for

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innocent

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public.

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, recently, some terrorists from Pakistan murdered innocent people in Jammu, India. To tackle these issues policymakers

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with no choice as they have to

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terrorists

with

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only by most deadly judgement rather than petty crimes.

In addition

,

such

policies not only punish the convicts but

also

creates awareness in citizens so that they never ever think of

commiting

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committing

threats.

Besides

terrorism

, there are

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extensive amount of internal crimes like rapes, murders, and mass shootings. Over the

last

decade, the number of

such

crimes

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gradually increased as the laws in some countries are not as strict as before.

For Instance

, In ancient times, in Arab countries,

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an offence

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offence

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like

a

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rape had a cruel

punishment

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punishments

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like chopping a convict in front of

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.

As a result

, lawbreakers do not dare to commit

such

offences.

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,

executing

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it in a public every citizen will aware

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law and

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consequences

consequenses

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which will

leads

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to

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a better society.

Finally

, to recapitulate some people may claim capital punishment is not necessary;

However

,

to

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frightened

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criminals to stop committing

such

actions authorities must continue

this

penalty to control the violence and

terrorism

,