The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar charts illustrate the variation of
Pop
, Use synonyms
Rock
and Classical Use synonyms
music
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albums
purchased by the public of Britain by males and females of different Use synonyms
age
groups ranging from 16 up to more than 45 Use synonyms
years
.
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Overall
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the
males are more interested in purchasing Correct article usage
apply
music
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albums
, Use synonyms
instead
of females. In the case of Linking Words
Pop
and Use synonyms
Rock
, around 28% of men buy Use synonyms
music
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albums
, compared to approximately 19% of females. Use synonyms
Whereas
, in the case of Classical Linking Words
music
, the percentage decreased to 9% for men and 6% for women.
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On the other hand
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the
people between the Correct article usage
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age
group of 16-24 and 25-34 Use synonyms
years
purchased around 30% of Use synonyms
Pop
and Use synonyms
Rock
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music
, Use synonyms
whereas
for Classical Linking Words
music
the percentage declined to 15% for 25-34 Use synonyms
years
and 1% for 16-24 Use synonyms
years
of Use synonyms
age
groups. The percentage of people Use synonyms
having
aged more than 45 Unnecessary verb
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years
purchasing Classical Use synonyms
music
is double that of Use synonyms
Pop
and Use synonyms
Rock
Use synonyms
music
. It is observed that people in the Use synonyms
age
group 35-44 Use synonyms
years
purchased Use synonyms
Pop
and Use synonyms
Rock
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music
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albums
approximately 28%, Use synonyms
whereas
2% for Classical Linking Words
music
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pop, rock, music, albums, age, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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