You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similiar to each other. You dont fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which point in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, I am your loyal reader over a decade, your article is very inspiring
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given me an refreshment in my daily life. In the recent article, your article was introduced my hometown, I was so exicted about it. My hometown is one of financial hub in the world. It has many high rise buildings, which similiar as New York, Shanghai, Tokyo. I do agree with
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point as Hong Kong is very much similiar with them as these cities are never stop even at night time. In Hong Kong, tram is one of the public transportation, which is still up and run in the modern city. Comparing with New York, Shanghai and Tokyo,
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type of public transportation cannot be found in modern city as
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type of inefficient public transportation have already been replaced by bus, cars. I wish I can have an opportunity to have a day tour with you to explore my hometown, which can have an explorement on other side of Hong Kong, which is mixed with historical and modern city. My name is May, my contact number is: 123456 and my email address is: [email protected]. Looking forward to receiving your reply. Yours faithfully, XXXXX
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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